Tuesday, 10 November 2009

Haiku op. 21

(photo) in Matsudo, Chiba prefecture, Japan

being the last in line
for taking ramen

fallen leaves


ma grande folle de soeur said...

I love all of them but this one particularly and I can not explain why... :) thanks.

Winter moon said...

Thank you very much.

I'm glad to hear that because haiku, I think, expresses the world you can't describe in prose. I believe the best way to respond a haiku is to make another haiku.

I guess this haiku has a kind of haimi(俳味), that means a sense of humour. I like the haiku too.