Monday, 29 March 2010

Haiku op. 206

(photo) untitled

the broken umbrella
getting struck in
the river of petals


ma grande folle de soeur said...

I love this one the image of the umbrella and the petals .. the broken object helplessely ugly and the beauty and perfection of the petals

petals fallen
in the soil -
the ugly umbrella

Winter moon said...

Thank you for the comments and a wonderful haiku.

Your haiku has "kire"(a cutting word in Japanese) that functions effectively.

It has been so cold over here for these days. The petals of cherry blossoms don't seem to feel spring.

ma grande folle de soeur said...

Here too... spring is coming in waves of sun and water :)

Winter moon said...

That's right! :-)